204 Slant Rhymes

[table title=”204. SLANT RHYMES and Other Almost Rhymes” price=”the almosts”]
[row item=”Slant Rhymes are words that don’t fit the technical definition of a Rhyme, but they sound close enough that some people mistake them for rhymes. There are varying definitions of Slant Rhymes and some of the other types of words that ALMOST rhyme. “][/row]

Everyone who passed kindergarten knows what a Rhyme is, but the key to  rhyming is doing it well. Okay, so I’m stating the obvious, but there are things about Rhyming that are NOT obvious.  It’s best to know them.

Look at the two words in the ovals below.  They Rhyme, but only the last syllable Rhymes. The first syllable DOES NOT rhyme, but because the last syllable is the STRESSED syllable, the words rhyme.

[phl style=”2″]Rhymes ALWAYS include a STRESSED syllable.  ALWAYS![/phl]

dependoffendNow look at the two words in the ovals below.  They do not rhyme.  As in the two words above, the last syllables rhyme, but these words still don’t rhyme.   This is because the last syllable, which is the rhyming syllable, is NOT a STRESSED syllable.


[phl style=”2″]ALMOST  Rhymes[/phl]

There are multitudes of names for words that almost rhyme. I am not going to differentiate between all of them or argue with the people who are certain which is which because there are way better things to argue about (like whether the Celtics can ever beat the Heat now that we have Ray Allen). But this graph shows some of the names for words that ALMOST Rhyme.

rhymeweaver rhyme meter rhythm writing for kids children's stories lines foot feet variance mixed meter pentameter octameter tetrameter iamb anapest trochee dactyl double rhyme stressed unstressed syllable double masculine feminine ending Lane Fredrickson elision enjambment end stopped stopping

Almost Rhymes basically fall into three categories:

[tab title=”Off Syllable”]This type of Almost Rhyme occurs when the words would rhyme if the syllable STRESS were aligned, but it is not.  The example at the top of the page is this type of Almost Rhyme: Capitol/Symbol, mutton/bison.[/tab]
[tab title=”Initial Sound”]This type of Almost Rhyme occurs when both the initial sounds and the vowel sounds are identical, but the final consonalt sound is different: hone/home, robe/rope, breathe/breeze.[/tab]
[tab title=”End Sound”]This type of Almost Rhyme occurs when the final consonant sound/sounds are the same, but the vowel sound is different:  clasp/cusp, guest/gust,beard/heard.  Note that even the initial consonant sounds can be the same, but it is the final vowel sound (either alone or in conjunction with that end consonant sound) that makes a rhyme. [/tab]
[phl style=”2″]A Perfect Rhyme is always best.  It just is.[/phl]

shutterstock_108445442There will be times when you can get away with a less than perfect rhyme. But that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t look for a perfect rhyme.  You should.  It’s unlikely that you’ll find an audience or an editor that finds a slew of Slant Rhymes good poetry.  But there will be times when everything else is working, the meter, the story, the sounds, the themes, and yes, every once in a while, you can sneak in an Almost Rhyme.

Comments? Questions?  Lane@RhymeWeaver.com

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